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Right, so I pulled out of the previous GFX round due to not being able to finish on time. Since then I've been working on the image on-and-off and now it's finished only about a week late.

The picture shown below is half the size, the fullsize one can be found by clicking on the picture.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a268/dongstyle_ltd/Not%20photos/technologyfinal.jpg

The full resolution pic (1280xs1024) is low quality...the high quality version is 1.1Mb and doesn't fit on photobucket xD Lame. Except I feel justified with the size...this was hand-drawn from start to finish.

I should have tidied up the sketchlines more, but wasn't actually intending to spend this much effort on it. Meh.

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STROP HAS A GIIIRRLFRIIIEEEND!


Actually no she's not a girlfriend. But since she isn't intending to date anybody else and I'm not intending to date anybody else for quite a while, you could say it's a similar arrangement.

I assume you did most of the detailing with the shoes, skin, and twin sabres.


Yeah, actually the idea for the engraving on the butterfly swords came from her online handle. The shoes are very quick renditions of Feiyues, as they're the shoe of choice for martial arts and parkour (I have a pair myself). Maybe I should think up a costume!
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I was taking a welcome break trying to free myself from those shackles that were the WoM (oh god you have no idea how heavy a weight of nearly three years feels when you can barely muster up the energy to think about when you're going to move it forward!!!) Lately I've been reading way too much Air Gear (for you manga nuts out there, it's by Oh! Great, enough said), so I thought I'd doodle something out and revisit an old character of mine (well, Cen's idea).

Here's a small version, I guess this'll get tidied up and become a concept sheet!

http://i1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb476/stropmd/crimsongear2.png

Maybe I ought to put more clothes on her...

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I was taking a welcome break trying to free myself from those shackles that were the WoM

But you still have to update the Archive. But breaks are always good. Sometimes you just word on something too long and you get so sick of it you start to hate it.
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http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/wonde.jpg
Might as well leave this here.
The sash/skirt thing could be due to the lack of a neck tie, a jacket, demin preferably, would give her a rougher look, especially on top of the otherwise feminine corset. Shades are for rule of cool, as well as the fact that she is missing a way to shield her eyes, something she might be needing if she goes - flying in the sun, and gain her an advantage in gear wars, as she outside would be able to navigate with the sun in her face, while she inside, in darker buildings, would have to adjust her eyes from darker to lighter, and not lighter to darker, which does take a while.

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I am a big fan of these suggestions!

1) I'll figure out a way for the sash not to completely conceal the tatt.
2) Denim jacket, totally.
3) Shorter, bulkier gloves.
4) I may have to think about the shape of the shades.
5) What should I do about the chaps? And the air tracks... how do I make them look more... cohesive?

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4) Yes, I didn't quite manage with that, I just imagined her looking over the top of the shades.
5) The chaps and the air tracks works, at least in my opinion. The air tracks could get more "boot"-y with some stitches and a more tough toe, but otherwise I do think looks great. Perhaps search up a western style boot to locate the patterning better (I believe it's on the side normally), and for colouring, either keep the entire AT in leather, or at least the shin part of it.

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The results of the second round of edits:

http://i1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb476/stropmd/crimsongear2b.png

Note that I also increased the width of the belt. Extraneous straps on the gloves are such a manga thing. While Crimson's emblem is a heartagram, her secondary feature is the rose: this'll feature in the design on the ATs, as well as on the rotating joints and the clasps that hold both the sash and the chaps to the belt (I still can't get comfortable with an actual leather boot AT... leather boots don't flex at the ankle at all!!!! I'll think about it.)

Once we reach an agreement I'll line and colour it. I think I might even bump up the resolution so I can get some REAL detail work on it haha.

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She is going to kick our butts with her eyes closed...
It looks good. I do agree about boot-based AT, especially in leather, would never be a good idea. If it wasn't clear from my comment above, it was mainly to try and imitate the design, while the jointed parts seems a lot better, especially considering the design of an anthro horse ancle and foot. You might want to remove the soal.. sole? of the boot ont the ATs, it looks clumpsy, and the previous design of the footing part of the ATs was probably the best for her, as it looks far more graceful.
Other than that, yes, she is going to kick our butts. Or do a wheel spin in our faces or something similar.
Good job, she would be manga worthy.

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Or do a wheel spin in our faces or something similar.


I'll run my road into your face!!! (Sounds a bit like Agito, that bishie creeper).

Yes, I quite like the way this has turned out, I'll do a bigger version and pretty it up and all. I doubt a tartan sash would work, but we'll see.
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Guys, I have a confession to make.

...

I freaking hate doing clean lineart.

http://i1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb476/stropmd/crimsongear2c.png

Note that the hair and stuff is uncleaned lines from a prior layer. Oh god this had better looking awesome coloured or I am going to rage!

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http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/crimson.jpg
She has to have proper hair, doesn't she.
Or at least not sketchy lines.
(And yes, I did reline that entire picture just for that and some details.)

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We're finally starting to get a little somewhere.

There's still a very long way to go, though.

http://i1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb476/stropmd/crimsongear2d.png

What colour should the gloves, chaps, and boots be?

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Doubtless some of you are getting sick of daily updates on this... but hey, fleshing out a concept takes time!

http://i1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb476/stropmd/crimsongear2e.png

Wonder what colour the wheels should be. After this, it's time to render and detail! Piercings, glasses, hair, leathers, jacket, corset, sash, chaps and gloves, boots... each with their unique material characteristics. And then what to do with the background...

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but its kinda weird with a pig head

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And then what to do with the background...

It is a character sketch. You don't need a background, but a field would be nice. Seeing how she is a horse.
Wonder what colour the wheels should be.

No idea. Just don't make them clash with the rest of the drawing and you will be fine.
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